Take Note: This excerpt needs some serious editing. I haven't posted in a couple weeks and I have no idea what day it is half the time anymore, so realizing it's Saturday, I grabbed a section I was working on to post.
Hours had passed by, and while I’d hoped
to get some sleep, I merely drifted in and out of a fitful rest in the
passenger’s seat. I felt the hair raise on my arms and a tingle, that seemed
all too familiar like an old friend, run down my spine. At the very moment I
gasped, Bastian accelerated the car.
I was about to ask him why when a large
beast breaking from the tree line drew my attention. There was no mistaking
that the mass of fur and muscle was feline, but I’d never even seen a tiger or
lion as massive as this thing was, let alone a native cougar. While the
darkness and speed of the car made it difficult to get a good look, I could see
it looked very similar in color to a lion, but it lacked a mane, and at its
size I would assume it would be a male. I, however, had no experience with
large cats, other than the occasional run-in with a cougar, and the thing was
no fucking cougar.
“Bastian, stop the car! Pull over!” I
shouted. “There’s a fucking lion back there. It must have gotten loose from a
zoo or something.”
“What are you going to do, stop it and
take it back? Besides, it was just a bear,” he said, accelerating even more.
“That was not a bear.” I look at
him incredulous before looking back out the window. “Look, it’s still there.
Like it’s trying to run alongside us.”
“I’m
telling you, it’s a bear. I think you’re a little too stressed out.” He changed
lanes, moving away from the animal and accelerated further.
I saw
the beast turn and disappear back into the woods. Yeah, I didn’t know what I’d
planned to do had Bastian actually pulled over, but something told me I needed
to come face to face with the large cat. I remembered the tingle down my spine
and the hair raising on my arms, and I wondered if it was merely a coincident.
Something niggled at the back of my mind, something Innocence had said once.
“Let’s
get something straight, the next time I tell you to pull my car over,
you damn well better pull it over. Understood?” I said to him.
“Sure
thing, Coral Ann. Would you prefer to drive?” He looked at me, and I shook my
head. “It was just a bear.”
“Okay,
sure. It was a bear.” I blew out a breath. “How long before we get to her place?”
“Probably
nine or ten hours. You still have time to sleep if you want,” he said, his tone
softer and more caring than before, and I closed my eyes.
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